Here is another updated animatic. I have lost the compensating pan shot at the start because , as James pointed out during our crit, it reveals a problem with my use of 2D in a 3D space. The house spans across several of the layers, but is only one image. It is also strange to see this pan at the start when all of the rest of the images are flat and still.
The ending has been changed a lot as well, the timing works a lot better now I think, but I am still not totally happy with it. We are getting feedback on Monday, so I will wait and see what the tutors have to say then work some more on it.
Timing has been fiddled without throughout the film because with the addition of the new ending it became quite a bit too long. It is still a few seconds over, but I think there are still some sections which could be done quicker than they are currently.
Some good news is that Jack Vaughan, who did the music for our second year film ‘We Weren’t the First Ones Here’, has agreed to do the music for the film. Exciting!
At the moment I am a bit unsure about what to do next. It is time to get cracking on actually making the film which is quite scary, I don’t know where to actually start!